|Reviews for Sullen|
| Sapphire Spectrum chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
i loved it. every second of it i loved.
'i dance when there's no one to notice mistakes/ when the music is mine' that was brilliant.
thanks - going on my faves.
| Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Very good writing. i can realate to this. On the outside, I don't look like a little girl-but my eyes look young, and I am guilty of crying when I stub my toe, or am tired. I am guilty of giggling over the most rediculus things, and spinning like a little girl.
I really liked the line "I cry when the glass breaks like/a dream in my hand, so". Just great imagery.
| s m e l l . o f . r a i n chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
A thought-proking question... I emphasize with you.
I like the different images in each stanza, and the different concepts on each line... Nicely written.
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
WOW I seriously do not know what to say you are brilliant :D
| CowGirl1987x2006 chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
wow... great job on this.
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
...wow... That was beautiful!