Reviews for Betrayal of a Bleeding Heart
Eleanor Gibson chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Liked this alot. So true. Expresses pain that many have shared, and many experience. Well done. -Rae
blacksunrise chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
nicely written .
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
OH MY GOODNESS! this poem is INCREDIBLE! awesome job!
Lova Boy chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
Why must life be that way? I will read more of your stories and poems, as they are full of grave truth, truth hopefully no one will have to face anymore... And believe it or not, winter is my favorite time of year! And I will not hold that against you.
Brian A.S.
Cinnamon Zo chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
Very very good. Easy to relate to, pulls at your heart and brings back memories... Thanks for your review! Keep writing!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
i liked that, i liked that a lot. it was well done. the use of capitals was used well as well. a sad poem but a very good one :)
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
I know the feeling.
Oh how WELL I know the feeling.
Great job!