Reviews for Boundaries
JinxShadowCat chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
wow this has so much feeling i almost started crying i know how you feel here
Ropedncr chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
hi, i really liked your poem, especially the line "Pain grows,like a perverse infection." i'm going to add you to my favorites.
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
oh no this poem is so sad and touching .please tell me u 2 worked it out.
~Nat
fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
aw... very sad... nice job though!
Ever Laughing One chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
That was beautiful.
breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
Oh! *pets* I hope you and Kerri are doing better. . .*pets some more*
Poems that are just blatant emotion are awesome. Just the fact that someone can be so honest is amazing. I have this restraint when I write almost always, which is probably why I'm always unsatisfied with thoe pieces I do that with. The style you used is wonderful, doesn't mince words, is right to the point. When you read it, you can feel your frustration and pain and I just hope everything is better. *hugs*
-Jess
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
I don't think this is badly written at all, hun. I think it's wonderful. It's so raw and emotional. You protrayed how you're feeling perfectly. Great job!
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
that was beauitufl. you captured the emotions well, it was really powerful, and your use of line was excellent. a great poem
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
aw :( too bad you guys are having problems. i hope it works out for you, i really do. :) well one good thing came out of it: a great poem! im adding u to favs ;)
bach-player chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
not horrible...very well done i thought...hang in there!