Reviews for Goodbye Baby |
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marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/14/2004 very expressive..yet at the end i noticed a typo: "Maybe now it's won't kill me"...you may have meant just "it" or something else...but please don't let it rock your boat. other than that, thumbs up! thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
oh frenzy chapter 1 . 6/14/2004 Awesome poem! Although I never expected less form you! Keep up the good work and try to forget abbout Joey, he is just a little...something! lol great job! |