Reviews for Without |
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Ethereal Oceans chapter 1 . 6/23/2004 Without you no more trusting Without you only lusting The only friend who keeps me in line The only friend who never tells a lie Without you insecurities return Without you, more beer and rum Without you I will rot away Without you I'll never see a true friend another day *I loved this poem! its so sad! more pina coladas on the way! lol! Haley |
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/14/2004 awesome poem...i can definitely feel your pain..loved how you used repitition to develop your overall tone and mood. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
oh frenzy chapter 1 . 6/14/2004 Awesome as usual! Keep up the sad and depressing love poems, they r great! lol! |