Reviews for Without
Ethereal Oceans chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
Without you no more trusting
Without you only lusting
The only friend who keeps me in line
The only friend who never tells a lie
Without you insecurities return
Without you, more beer and rum
Without you I will rot away
Without you I'll never see a true friend another day
*I loved this poem! its so sad! more pina coladas on the way! lol!
Haley
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
awesome poem...i can definitely feel your pain..loved how you used repitition to develop your overall tone and mood. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
oh frenzy chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
Awesome as usual! Keep up the sad and depressing love poems, they r great! lol!