Reviews for Tired Of Me
distantdistorteddisturbed chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Your right it is a bit disjointed..but i like it too. The last stanza is my favourite i love the line 'And run my blood into your dreams.' it created great imagery and finished the piece off nicely.
~*Elcy*~
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
That was nicely written. I feel the same way all the time, It's like your friends say they're thir but you can see the annoyed look on thier faces and hear their minds thinking oh look she cut herself again I wonder who she's trying to get to notice her. The poem expressed it nicely
I'm Sorry chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
I'm not tired of you... yet ;) good poem.
APersonAndAHalf chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
I like it, too. Disjointed poems are cool. You seem very lonely. *Hugs rogue mistique* Feel better?