Reviews for I Remember Us
FELICIA-SPENCER chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
Here's another beautiful poem, that was filled with so many emotions. I liked how you're kinda pleading for things to go back the to way they were. There's this old saying that this poem reminded me of. It goes: a love that's hard to forget, is a love that needs to be remembered. Anyway I loved this, and I can't wait to read more.
littlemaren chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
you know, that actually realtes a lot to my liffe right now..it's really well written and explained. I love it!
good job,
maren
p.s- please R&R my pieces
dandelionia chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
That's beautiful, and very easy to relate to. I understand the poems are supposed to flow together, but it might be easier to read if there was another line separating each haiku. Other than that, I thought that they were beautiful and true to human emotion.
breakme chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
Aww I think Im going to cry because of this... I really miss my best friend that I lost coming into highschool last year...