Reviews for Down Fall
Shadow of Silver chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Nice poem. Your poems have suddenly gotten longer as you've progressed, which in my opinion is good and bad at the same time...otherwise you've done a nice job here. (Sorry I haven't been able to review, my laptop was broken _*)
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James Li chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
"Now I'm in my love to* (too) deep, hehe just wanted to point that out... its a great poem...but it sounds like u want him and u don't... but still a great poem
GothicRose85 chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
That's quite a pessimistic way to look at a relationship...I hope that doesn't happen! It's good, though!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
that was really good