|Reviews for The Archmages|
| Lily Pierce chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Yes I know I took ages, but I've been so lazy lately... Anyway, I love Laurence! He's hilarious. I can't wait to see your next chapter of this! _
| Loki Mischeif-Maker chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
I still like BD better, but this is really good. . . .
You have a real flair for eccentiric characters, don't you, and Delta od a really great one. THere were a few grammar errors throughout, but I can understand that.
It's the first chapter, so I can't say much about the plot. I'm interested in the character, though.
| Klawlancer chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Casual and straightforward. I like the simple everyday humour, although if it wasn't for the summary at the start I would have exactly NO idea what it was all about.
I really can't judge it too well but I think its on the right track.
If ask me to choose between this and Black Dragon though I would have to pick the latter as it seems to be on a far more important part of the story. Also that one seems to have a deeper story as of now.
| Casey C chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Which I prefer? I'll have to wait to see but so far this one seems good. Laurence is funny _ And I like Sharon already. Weird premise, can't wait to see where it's going and everything but great work!