Reviews for Nothing But Oblivious
strawberryblitz chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
WOWzie! I must say that I really enjoyed this one! Good work.
crybabekrizz chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
mixed feelings and thought right? between concious and insane. i totally agree! i think that all human beings are like that and i really lurv that trait. ;)
flawed perfection chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
I like how this was written. :D Keep writing!
Thomas Morrow chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
I like the message, its very good. The way you conveyed your idea was good. One problem, and I mean this as constrcutive critisism, your rhythm is chopy...the poem doesn't flow together like a symphony...poems should flow. That's all I have to say. Overall, good job.
DarkenedLoner chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
i really dont know what else to say except for its a pretty good poem...
Blue Fountain Pen chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Wow! Very nicely written! I think the first three lines are a bit cliched, and when you read, you expect the rest of the poem to be that way, but it isn't. Still, I think the expressions in the first couple of lines are too over used, and could be changed. BFP P.S. I'm putting it into my faves!
rising-mist chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
it's great! i like it!
wilderness chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
this was a really nice poem! i like the lines and the way they are set out!
lani
crimsoninfinity chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
That is so good. The way you led it on until the end, how you made exist and oblivious together... I love it. This was really really good, I enjoyed it.