m, fuck.

dangerous. very, very dangerous.

it makes my brain tingle to read.

technically, i'm not an encourager of violent, deviant sexuality... but anyone who's experienced anything remotely close to this feels the honest burning passion in this work.

That was really good. In a sick, wrong way it was kind of sexy. I liked it. I really relate to the girl's point of view because I've felt that way once or twice.

All I can say is... wow. You've went deep into that poem and I felt the emotion, as if I were there myself. In a way it turned me on::Blushes:: I really enjoyed it. You did a good job.

The fact that this kinda turns me on hurts my brain... wonderful poem! Full of, uhm... emotion. _

WOW! I have no words. Good. Good. and Good. I liked it. I think I know and have some of those feelings that you expressed. Excellent job!~Dreamer to Fly~

A moment of silence..and then a laugh.. hm.. yeah. Hi. Very... haha... umm.. well yah anyways. This poem was very deep, and expressive.. yeah. alright I'm going to stop now and just walk away.. *walks away* yah.. good job..

*blinks* Wow...I am just utterly speechless at the feelings expressed withit the poem. It is sheer beauty. Keep up the good work and Ill be looking for more of your writings

...the pause is for my inability to speak. Fantastic. Dangerous. You wrote about a touchy subject. You took the risk, but it payed off well. It is strange and mysterious, and simply fascinating.

I love your work. Your poems work.

Have you heard the word 'speechless'? that's what describes me just perfectly right now. I totally have to agree with RisingBeauty...people are generally not honest enough to write what they really feel, sexually speaking, like this...this was AMAZING! good job, keep goin!

deep.. rated R for a reason.. hehe.. I love the almost random rhymes, and like I've said before in some reviews for your other stuff, vibrantly felt! I love it, it is really.. really.. i dunno because it left me speechless!

Wow... all I can say... wow... I'm not sure what to think, how to feel, or what to write to review this. (That's a good thing, as usually my reviews are filled with some good critisism.) Seriously though. This is amazing. People are so afraid to write what they feel, but you sure as hell weren't. I'm completely amazed at the honesty of emotion. It really made me feel as if I was talking to someone while they were... how would I say it... "in the moment." It was like a slap in the face, saying "You see what I'm doing? I like it, and you can't do anything about it." It was definitely powerful. I LOVE how you repeated the line "We'll make the devils blush and the angels salivate." Amazing write. I am thoroughly and completely impressed (which is not an easy thing to do.)

Wow, that was definitely simply lustful. No love in there at all. I did see the bondage and s&m. Ow.. It is so intensely descriptive that it's painful. Very painful. Heh, I'm guessing you aren't the dominate one in this case.. Excellent poem.