Reviews for Memory
Q-Storm chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
That was too cold. I like the line breaks and the repitition. Very dramatic and poetic. Keep writing this is great.
Ludius chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
I think this poem is ernest and well done. Advice: Be a little itty bitty more consistant with the format of the poem. You sometimes rhyme and sometimes don't. Being a little more consistant will be more comforting to the reader and possibly will help them enjoy your work more. Although I make a big deal about it, it really is microscopic but I'm just trying to help. Your poem is great! I hope I have been of use. :)