Reviews for Hurting You, Killing Me
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
well written and expressed. so sad though. if someone said the last two lines to my face, i think i'd cry!
Good work!
FrostedTeardrop chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Such a strong poem. I really liked the lines "I know this is hurting you, baby
But this is killing me." It draws out so much emotion. Great job.
RisingBeauty chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Beautiful. Nice job with your rhyming. It didn't seem forced at all, it just flowed, and added to the poem. I could really relate to this, and it made me want to cry. That, of course, is a good thing. It means you successfully captured the situation. I liked the lines "This friendship is based on hurt," "You have to release my heart; you gotta let me go..." and "I know this is hurting you/But this is killing me." All three of these lines really drew me into the poem and explained so much. Beautiful poem.