|Reviews for Enlightening Walk|
| Sweet Calamity chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
Wow... All the words ran together in my head toward the end, but I get the idea. You wield your vocabulary well, Sylph. The theme of this poem is lovely. The best line was "memory sap". I can't think of anything else to say, other than "Brilliant!"
| Kelpylion chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Well, I'd written a much longer review for this, but I lost it in a deluge of windows I was closing, and...
yeah, so I'm just going to comment that this was prety and full of lovely verdant images and smells and itchy bugs, great line with the peppermint, and loved the angst at the end. *rereads.*
Erm, that wasn't really a sentence, was it? Oh, well...must rush off to study for Bio regents. Promised my teacher I'd ace it. But I'll definitely be back to devour this fresh crop soon.