Reviews for Past
european coffee addict chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
Well done. I suggest to make your poems a bit longer, so that the reader learns more about the acting persons.
Soccerbabe chapter 1 . 1/24/2001
I love it! This will definately be one of my favorites! This doesn't remind me of my grandmother but it reminds me of my great-grandma. I was really close to her. Good job! Keep writing!Thanks for the review :-)
al'Laine Aranielle id Larq chapter 1 . 1/13/2001
I love poetry ) and this is poetry in its simplest and perhaps most beautiful form.
Erik's Angel chapter 1 . 1/4/2001
Cute. Reminds me of my own grandmother. Thanks for sharing it.