Reviews for Otherworldly Visit
NumblesTheAuthor chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
kind of creepy imagery but not a bad poem...
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
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But really other than that it's a tour de force of a poem. Your imagery and word choice are exquisite. Great job.
lyv
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
The poem becomes more personal and hard hitting in the last stanza. All that lead up to the last stanza is absolutely... breath taking for such a touchy subject. I suppose this poem will stick in my mind. Good work, fabulous writing.
Jenna xx
Lex C chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
whoa. A very thought-provoking piece, I like it.