|Reviews for Rhythm of the City|
| Abigaila Long chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
It confuses me a little with the change in pronouns, you use "me" and "I" at the beginning and then switch to "she" and "her". Is the narrator telling a story about a girl? But other then that (which is probably my own fault for not understanding, cause I'm no good with poems) it's really good. I love the phrase "Shakespearean darlings" where'd you come up with that? Great job!