Reviews for heart pains
ADreamer'sCurse chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Great detail and an excellent poem! _
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
I like _ in all of it's simpleness and the nice free verse format I must say. Could use a little rhythm and a couple lines look out of place BUT my dear this is wonderful and I can feel your pain easily by reading this. Nicely done.
Jenna xx
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
A strange way to be inspired, but a good poem nontheless. I liked the surrealistic atmosphere. Great work!
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
whoa!it's so...good!