Reviews for Twilight
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
i really liked this. you put a lot of imagery and power into only six lines. that's hard to do with this type of poetry. awesome job.
Nikolomagne chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Yin and Yang. Masculine and Feminine. Albedo et Nigredo, Hikari to Kage, Light and Shadow... everything must have opposition, including God Himself. Why is there evil in this world? Because without it, God would have no need to exist. No need for salvation. So by attaining balance in nature and spirit, tranquility can be achieved. So short a poem yet so big a review. Incredible. This is my favorite so far.
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
I love it! Nice work.
limpet666 chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
Wow thats really cool. Its short but really powerful.
"Clash of two powers" Is a great line which i like. It's greats great imagery in my mind and it's brilliant.
jovian soulsky chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Short and sweet! This poem was great! You write very well! _
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
very cool.. nice job!
marinawings chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
wow! absolutely beautiful! i love it.
invalid id chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Interesting...thought provoking...I like it in an off way.
PS: Could you please review my latest song thing? Thanks.
Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Short and really all I can say.