Reviews for The Life of a Brother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I especially like the very last line. Very sad, but beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Many things in life merely feign happiness, when actually pain and deceit are truly there. I am assuming that this is for your friend that you lost so many years ago. I hope you find peace with yourself, and may you no longer be tormented by the memory. If I have misinterpretted this poem, please get back to me and explain the deeper meanings. CheersLost in A World of Pain |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm once again you've writen a great poem. Hehe in case you dont notice this is Deaths Shadow 14 14 i changed my name on fiction press. Good work though i'm gona go read your other ones i haven't looked at yet |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's very sad, and i hope everything is better for you now. i have never expirianced the loss of a true friend, but i have seen family die (most i never truely got the chance to know). despite my lack of knowledge in this, the poem was touching and a fit tribute to your departed brother. |