Reviews for The Life of a Brother
Ajna chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Aww, I especially like the very last line. Very sad, but beautiful.
Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Many things in life merely feign happiness, when actually pain and deceit are truly there. I am assuming that this is for your friend that you lost so many years ago. I hope you find peace with yourself, and may you no longer be tormented by the memory. If I have misinterpretted this poem, please get back to me and explain the deeper meanings.

CheersLost in A World of Pain
Just-try'en-to-speak chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
Hm once again you've writen a great poem. Hehe in case you dont notice this is Deaths Shadow 14 14 i changed my name on fiction press. Good work though i'm gona go read your other ones i haven't looked at yet
Spootasia Tomoe chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
that's very sad, and i hope everything is better for you now. i have never expirianced the loss of a true friend, but i have seen family die (most i never truely got the chance to know).
despite my lack of knowledge in this, the poem was touching and a fit tribute to your departed brother.