Reviews for Opium Dream
rocket baby doll chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
love the last stanza, and the phrase opium dream... you should make this a song, the rhythm would really work well in a song...
Autumn tears chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Interseting choice for a analogy, Opium Dream... it has a lyrical ring to it. Your rhyme scheme is very good, it doesn't sound forced, or take away from the words and meaning of the poem itself. My favorite stanza was probably the last one.