|Reviews for words|
| BeyondRepair chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
hey, this was rather disjointed, or perhaps thats simply the way I read it because thats the way I'm feeling, either way I liked that feeling and it seemed to work for me. The line about imagination being more motivation than reality was just great as well, that was pure genius, I loved it! Still are your poems are always a struggle with me to work them out, perhaps thats cause I try and figure out where they're comign from now, and I dont' just feel the way they're going...know what I mean? Okay, perhaps I'm just rambling. Anyways, I think it was a good poem...oh yeah, I also really liked to imperfection thing and the dreams in the sky...for some reason that seemed to click with me...anyways, keep on writing, it gives me something to do!
| this is britt chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Great to see you again. What can I say about this poem? Like everything else, it's just completely wonderful. Your poems always delight me, they're just written so perfectly. I love it- "foolishness is my forte". Beautiful.