|Reviews for Illusions|
| Anja de Lange chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
It's good but I'm not all that good at poems and with most their meaning escapes me.
I like it though. You have a very complicated, intricate and interesting writing style. This, maybe is a bit wasted on me, but I do try! :)
| Chi Ame chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Awesome poem, nice rythm to it. I love the mood, and the lines, "Yesterday is today, And reality slips away." Great job! It's truly an amazing piece of work!
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
love that completely. a little hint of abstract in there. hehe ) nice work ... the second stanza especially. and the ending, too. eh, hang it all, the entire thing was great. check out something i've written?