It's good but I'm not all that good at poems and with most their meaning escapes me.

I like it though. You have a very complicated, intricate and interesting writing style. This, maybe is a bit wasted on me, but I do try! :)

Awesome poem, nice rythm to it. I love the mood, and the lines, "Yesterday is today, And reality slips away." Great job! It's truly an amazing piece of work!

love that completely. a little hint of abstract in there. hehe ) nice work ... the second stanza especially. and the ending, too. eh, hang it all, the entire thing was great. check out something i've written?
~k8