Reviews for An Empty Picture
loz chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
I luv the way this is set out as though it is ur flow of thoughts no fullstops. It makes the impact of the imagery even stronger. I luv the subject and really like the metaphor of the pictures. I like the rhyming structure throughout the stanzas, it's unusual to have this structure. It's liek you're still thinking about it eeven tho uve stopped writing the poem. Luv loz.