Reviews for Salle De Bal De La Vie
forgottenmoon831 chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
Wow, that is just, just awesome! You have such good ideas for your poems, the last line was perfect! Good comparison! This is going on my favorites too!
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
Nice poem! I like the foreign titles, they're much less mundane than English titles.
darkpaladin13 chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Just like the review I just wrote. This is a new kind of thing I've seen, short story-poems and it just has a good grip and good everything really.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
aw thats cool! makes me wanna go dance even though i cant dance, LOL! nice job yet again!
bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Nice! I liked the metaphor. Well written too. :)