I love gingerbread men, their creators had a very sadistic streak _

O_O WOAH! Man you really changed this one up! I like this version though! And who wrote the message? WHAT HAPPENED TO SCARLETT? Man so many questions hehe! I hope you update soon! ~lilyoftheflames

Hm...that was different than the first time. You made Yugi older huh? Anywayz I still like it! Update soon! I'll be waiting!~lilyoftheflames

0.0 Eep! EEP! Action picking up already? v.v I could never write like this...

o.0 I never read the original so... I think this is good anyway! I'm just going to guess now that Zvian was the guy who burnt up Jerico. I know I'm wrong tho...only read the first chapter... ...

Woot! New review of doom! o.o mysterious blue eyed man of doom? dundundun! Its been quite a while since you've updated! Glad to see you're alive, and that your stories were alive as well!

...August 7? Dude, its September 29!
Oh well, experiencing delays, I presume?

Evil, flaming, and...tea...I like Zvian, all for those reasons! I also like, how Scarlett is just somewhat there for the ride. I'm also glad you didn't let her drown in self pity to become a fat grumpy housewife! Keep writing .

Hey! R u gonna make mor of this storie?

Please right more storey! Its very good!1, and I wuld relly like to reed more about Scarlett, she seems enteresting!11

This is quite an interesting start, alot different from the other version of this story. I believe it makes it possible to become more attatached to the characters because there is more interaction! Keep up the good work!

WOO HOO! You revised! Not that the other one was bad though! I can't say wether it's better or worse b/c it's a totally different way of starting! But I did like this beginning! Keep it up and update really soon! I'll be waiting! ~ko