|Reviews for What A Waste|
| Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
that's really good, I think. I like the rhyming style, but it looks like you would of said something better, in places, except that you were trying to make it rhyme. Like on "Never did I think,/ feelings could shrink," Shrink doesn't quite fit, I dunno.
Also, I don't think those lines fit into the poem...it's like something you brought up, but you really didn't explain it.
| littlemarenengh chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
wow! that was powerful! lol..really...you have to keep writing! geez... it blew me away!
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
| suey and liuey chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
i think you mean waste?
not bad though.
| The Missing Spoon chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
I think you meant "waste"-at first I thought your use of "waist" could be a play on words, but it doesn't really work as such.
| On Mercury chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
that poem was very short and bitter, i liked it. it conveyed a lot of emotion. good work!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
wow... deep... dont give into cutting, its a horrid addiction you cant stop. trust me. nice rhyming ;)