that's really good, I think. I like the rhyming style, but it looks like you would of said something better, in places, except that you were trying to make it rhyme. Like on "Never did I think,/ feelings could shrink," Shrink doesn't quite fit, I dunno.
Also, I don't think those lines fit into the poem...it's like something you brought up, but you really didn't explain it.

wow! that was powerful! lol..really...you have to keep writing! geez... it blew me away!
great job
~maren~

Incredible!

i think you mean waste?
not bad though.

I think you meant "waste"-at first I thought your use of "waist" could be a play on words, but it doesn't really work as such.

that poem was very short and bitter, i liked it. it conveyed a lot of emotion. good work!
OM

wow... deep... dont give into cutting, its a horrid addiction you cant stop. trust me. nice rhyming ;)