Reviews for What A Waste
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
that's really good, I think. I like the rhyming style, but it looks like you would of said something better, in places, except that you were trying to make it rhyme. Like on "Never did I think,/ feelings could shrink," Shrink doesn't quite fit, I dunno.
Also, I don't think those lines fit into the's like something you brought up, but you really didn't explain it.
littlemarenengh chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
wow! that was powerful! have to keep writing! geez... it blew me away!
great job
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
suey and liuey chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
i think you mean waste?
not bad though.
The Missing Spoon chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
I think you meant "waste"-at first I thought your use of "waist" could be a play on words, but it doesn't really work as such.
On Mercury chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
that poem was very short and bitter, i liked it. it conveyed a lot of emotion. good work!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
wow... deep... dont give into cutting, its a horrid addiction you cant stop. trust me. nice rhyming ;)