Reviews for A yearning to be young
Leo chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Well i am 16 lol so i cant relate but i wish i was younger because when you are little all the things that mean alot to you now were meaningless then and you werent so stressed
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
oh wow thanks for all the reviews! and yes you had me scared for a second there, lol! hehe, sall good! and this poem was very well done! i liked it alot! magnificent!
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
i like the way you wrote this it gets straight to the point however you're NOT old...all of us are agin whether we like it or not and it doesn't matter what number you are you can always be young inside my uncle is in his late forties and he still acts like a kid it's great so don't be down n keep up the good work! :)
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
This was awesome. I still wish I was little. *sigh* Screw getting old . it's no fun. Well anywho. I also wanted to thank you for reading my songs. My friend is making me get a band together to sing them lol. Anywho. I can't wait to read more of your writing. Bies
strummychick chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
can relate to this totally. a really great piece, keep up good work!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
wow! expressive poem! and i can very well relate! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. i really enjoyed the lines:
"But alas fate is not that kind
As the dawn brings another day
Tension mounts as I grow old
A crimony sets in my heart today"!
Wonderfully done, Miss Spencer!