Reviews for Racorithian
Relix chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Very good fantasy story. It needs a bit more of polishing in the story department, like why are the Racorithian there, or what are them? Well, the story isnt complete, and I hope those things will get detailed with the time. By the way, you should make a bit more space between the lines, so it doesnt look like a big mess of words. Trust me, it has happened to me already with my 2 stories (2nd one in development) and it's a mess. Well, I'll keep a sight in this one! )