Reviews for The Eternal Record Keepers
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Great metaphors... I love this.. a language never seen before in books... language of the stars... this is so vividly incredible. Write on.. Kat
pixy-dizzy chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
*gapes* And I didn't know about this poem being up WHY? *sniffles happily* And yes, I love it...this poem is absolutely beautiful. Like I've said before...your vocabulary and word choice is amazing...*HUGGLES* You rock. You rock you rock you rock. (AND I'M NOT SCARED OF PRAISE! Er...*shifty eyes* At least, not really...) Lol. But thank you so, so much. And I apologize for not finding this until, what, a year later? *huggles* Now you must tell me when your birthday is so I can give you a birthday present...or a belated one, anyway...

You are awesome. Awesome. And I am so, so sorry, again! I LUVLES YOU!
RisingBeauty chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
That's beautiful! I love all the metaphors and such. It really made me think about the stars in a way that I don't usually think about them, and in a way made them seem so much more beautiful. I really admire the fact that you wrote it in the form of a sonnet, that takes a lot of time and talent. I especially love the title, because it didn't give away what you were talking about. So it was a secret until the very end, "We must but learn that language of the stars." Wonderfully written, keep writing!