Reviews for Bleeding, Toxic Demise
Mindi chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
I dunno about the banshee but the "silver savior" is awesome... love it! great poem hun- you lie when u say ur stuff aint great
Junsui-chan chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Wow...that was a lil' disturbing. Though I can't say I haven't thought or done something similar to that before. But hey, I got better. Anyway, good poem. Not all poetry has to rhyme. It was really good, I thought, and anyone who says differently is just being stupid. Keep writing.
ERSM333 chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
This was amazingly graphic but amazingly graphic. I really liked it. It touches me somewhere deep inside, and I felt it a whole writing, and keep reaching deep inside of yourself. That is what makes it good.
black-heart-black-life chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
That was not bad it was good
sarcastic-student chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
One word dude: graphic. But you did a great job with this, it was sad but it didn't "beg for sympathy". Nice work.
breakme chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
Okay your way too critical of your own work. THIS ROCKS! It does make sense and I like the format alot. Its deep and vivid and it flows really well. This is probally one of the best poems I've read on fictionpress. Good Job.