|Reviews for gun violence|
| lalamushu chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
i can honestly say i applaud you for your work. very well done.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
wow... very very creepy and powerful but unfortunateloy true
| mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
that was intense/i dint quite like the theme but you stuck to it and played it out form wasgoodbut it got shakey in a couple all i think this is a decent flow.
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
my god, very impressive rhyming!
And the last two lines... wow! Without exaggeration, i say this is a great poem. Two thumbs up!