| Reviews for gun violence |
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   lalamushu chapter 1 . 7/6/2004 i can honestly say i applaud you for your work. very well done. |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/30/2004 wow... very very creepy and powerful but unfortunateloy true |
| mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 6/20/2004 that was intense/i dint quite like the theme but you stuck to it and played it out form wasgoodbut it got shakey in a couple all i think this is a decent flow. ~aMoOn (Nats friend) |
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 6/19/2004 my god, very impressive rhyming! And the last two lines... wow! Without exaggeration, i say this is a great poem. Two thumbs up! |