Reviews for Piece of Cake
eraila chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
This was sorta nice...You pretty much summed up how many people feel some times, me too:)
taurus-thatsme chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
I think this is the most powerful poem I've read on fictionpress
Kalopsia chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
oh! nice morbid poetry. this is pretty cool...and different from other suicidal poems.
Dwyer chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
I liked it, and you get extra points for the rhyming. Good job.
Eyes Unclouded chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
It's kind of horrifying, associating the words "piece of cake" with suicide. I hope you don't really feel this way. Life may be unfair and cruel and painful, but it's our only chance. For what, I still haven't figured out.
EmeraldEyes89 chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
Reminds me of something an ex friend of mine tried. The idea of the poem is a bit morbid, though I cant say that I havent had the same ideas before, but it has excellent wording and flow.
~Amanda~
Armand chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
I wish I had more to say...but you've said it all... ;;
stripey13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
this made my eyes water i'm adding this to my list of favs of coarse you can share my poem/s with anyone you want