|Reviews for Haiku collection: Friendship|
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 2 . 6/30/2004
You capture so much imagery in so few words which is so beautiful. I love your haikus.
| Song of Life chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
very good, i like the simplisity, it says a lot!
| A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Very Calming... yet the meter kind of nerves me... I would like it better if you put the "you" from the second line into the first... just my opinion... but the rest worked out nicely... keep up the great work...
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
very brilliant haiku! i can very well relate to this one! loved the metaphor that's used! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| My Mental Disaster chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
I like this, taking things down to the grass roots of metaphors: REmembrance. Things shape themselves into images and atach themselves to objects as they strive for the corporeal. Your poem is straitforward, giving it a quality of sencerity that matches well with your chosen format. You have a gift for Haiku
| RandomGoth chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
a very magical haiku, that says so much more then it appears to at first. :) thank you for sharing, it made me smile.
Thanks for the reviews by the way.
I shall probably email you later, thanks for the support I appreciate it
yours in randomness!