Reviews for Haiku collection: Friendship
SayIt'sWrong chapter 2 . 6/30/2004
You capture so much imagery in so few words which is so beautiful. I love your haikus.
Song of Life chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
very good, i like the simplisity, it says a lot!
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Very Calming... yet the meter kind of nerves me... I would like it better if you put the "you" from the second line into the first... just my opinion... but the rest worked out nicely... keep up the great work...
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
very brilliant haiku! i can very well relate to this one! loved the metaphor that's used! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
My Mental Disaster chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
I like this, taking things down to the grass roots of metaphors: REmembrance. Things shape themselves into images and atach themselves to objects as they strive for the corporeal. Your poem is straitforward, giving it a quality of sencerity that matches well with your chosen format. You have a gift for Haiku
RandomGoth chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
a very magical haiku, that says so much more then it appears to at first. :) thank you for sharing, it made me smile.
Thanks for the reviews by the way.
I shall probably email you later, thanks for the support I appreciate it
*huggles*
yours in randomness!
RG
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