|Reviews for Haiku collection: Friendship|
| mezzie chapter 29 . 4/25/2006
lovely, the line that really touched my was "nestle shyly in my tears"mezzie
| Ygg chapter 28 . 4/25/2006
Poems as tears.. wow very original and creative! The flow too is amazing. You're really a brilliant writer you know :)
| Vivian Rose Pierce chapter 27 . 3/24/2006
Very nicely writen. I like it...you don't normaly think of giving as recieving, but how correct you are.
| Gwalchmai chapter 27 . 3/24/2006
Wow! Captures the true spirit of Haiku.
| cygnus olor chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
it's so rare that i appreciate haikus... but thanks to you i now think otherwise...
i love your imagery and allegory..."tears of liquid stone""let me weep your tears""so much beauty in sadness"
everything was heartfelt and i feel for 2 particular haikus: "like the wind" and "everything"
i'm so glad to find someone who values friendship as i do...
* ner *
| nanashi-04 chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I love it.
| white-clouds chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
| white-clouds chapter 26 . 12/20/2005
When I read that, I felt the whole room come alive. That was very beautiful.
| H.S.H chapter 26 . 12/20/2005
Very good. Very realistic.
| Gwalchmai chapter 26 . 12/20/2005
what a smile! confusing time itself; please, keep on writing ...and breathing
| myno chapter 26 . 12/20/2005
gentle, sweet, lovely.
| tenshi-no-uta chapter 26 . 12/20/2005
Beautiful. *nods* Very well written.-Tenshi
| crushed by a dandelion chapter 26 . 12/20/2005
You really have to think about the rhythm. How it flows as Haiku. And then, I think how you put the whole story into three. little. lines. Which is amazing.
| smile persephone chapter 26 . 12/20/2005
Simply beautiful (as a haiku should be). I adore the concept of breathing memories.
| Gwalchmai chapter 24 . 12/20/2005
I love the sound of version 2; besides, it avoids the artificial split between "doing" and "saying", as, after all, there are words that can hurt more profoundly, than many a violent "deed"...