Reviews for Shade
Astral Ferret Warlord chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
oh wow, this was really beautiful, I esecially loved the paradoxes and the line 'Is it ignorance, she wonders, that makes the sinless free of pain?' its just so...Im not sure how ot describe it.
Solanio chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
This is my favorite of yours, so far. The richness and layers of the visual elements, the beautiful weaving of words - it's a superb piece in every way.
Medevia chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
Wow... really good. I have nothing to say in the way of errors. It's so beautifully written; I was mesmerized until the very end.
Ebony Moonlight chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
That was beautiful. I especially loved the line "Innocence robed in sin." Again, keep up the great work!
~The One and Only
Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I love the term "heavy velvet
corruption." I'm not sure why but that was just great. I love the truth in the last stanza that we are all two parts of a whole: black and while, sin and innocence, yin and yang. They blend together so perfectly, saying that there is a fine line of difference between the two. Or perhaps, sin and innocence overlap in the field of gray. Again, fantastic job. It's one of my favorites now *clickity*
Dawn of Fire chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Well there's a new story on favorite's list. Very well done.
Raphael de blah de blah chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Thanks for reveiwing my work, I love yours. I can see the effort and time that you've taken with this. Its beautiful. I love the whole contradiciton theme throughout it. I can really see this. I only wish I coulde see into your mind, and grasp it fully like it desevers to be.
Blackening the Ivy chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
interesting. luv the line "the feel of dead flesh beneath her claws."