Reviews for Used
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
damn what a feeling, i hate hate hate when that happens! man! but yeah... awesome song, you capture stuff so so so much better than i do.
Charisma101 chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
This is awesome! You've read my stuff, you know what i mean, ecept you put it in better words (and in a song) lol, love this one too..!
elmo stole my socks chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
i like it...imagining tune in my head. do you write music for your poems? and the lyrics are easy to relate to
Wren Craven chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Awesome piece...I loved the line 'using me over and over again' was very well written. Thanks for the reviews you've sent me...they did not go unnoticed!
Song of Life chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Know how you feel and how much it hurts to be used. I cry for you. I really liked the song, you really expressed your feelings well, I only wish I wrote when I was bein used. Write on!
MagzRL chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Very good. I like the depression and the theme. The way it's written and the rhyme scheme is a good pattern. Plus the title is very fitting. Although, I think the ending was a little abrupt. Good job though!