Reviews for When The World is Empty
starzstruck-1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
*Sniffle* This was extremely cute. Your poems, i've noticed, are more freeverse.. and thats good.. because if you tried to rhyme these, and forced them into a set rhythm, they wouldnt be half as good as they are now. You know your friends will be with you always, keep that in mind.
~Blessed Be~
LifeMystery chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Nice poem, though I'm a bit befuddled..*blink* fallen Angel? Or friends? It seems to switch at the end..But otherwise, lovely.
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Great poem. Its lovely.
AngelaiR chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
hey hey! You're pretty good at writing poetry, impressive! Sorry, hehe, people who can write poetry are wonderful and you do, you write really good poetry because you let your emotions out. I really liked this one becasue of the rhythem ya had, I don't know how to explain it but yeah you know what I mean. (Wow, I am actually writing a review that is longer than usual) Your friends will always be there for you; aswell as I will. hehe.
toodles ~ Angel