Reviews for When The World is Empty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *Sniffle* This was extremely cute. Your poems, i've noticed, are more freeverse.. and thats good.. because if you tried to rhyme these, and forced them into a set rhythm, they wouldnt be half as good as they are now. You know your friends will be with you always, keep that in mind. ~Blessed Be~ ~Chele~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice poem, though I'm a bit befuddled..*blink* fallen Angel? Or friends? It seems to switch at the end..But otherwise, lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem. Its lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey hey! You're pretty good at writing poetry, impressive! Sorry, hehe, people who can write poetry are wonderful and you do, you write really good poetry because you let your emotions out. I really liked this one becasue of the rhythem ya had, I don't know how to explain it but yeah you know what I mean. (Wow, I am actually writing a review that is longer than usual) Your friends will always be there for you; aswell as I will. hehe. toodles ~ Angel |