Reviews for The Railway Tracks
liketheriverflowing chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Very beautiful... although it seems very sad, the ending has something positive to look forward to. Nice job Steppenwoelfin.
Dusterhead chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
That was his sister I bet. ::Fades away::
KatLat chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
wow..that was...powerful.
Virgo Child chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
That was tragically beautiful. Excellent writing through and through. Only problem I could see was a slight overabundance of passive voice - many of those "had"s could have been cut away from the verbs, and the prose would flow better. Wonderful story overall, though. :)
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Tragic...But it was good all the same.
fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
aw.. that's an adorable, but sad story. I had a feeling it was her! his sister! right? lol... i hope im right otherwise i must sound stupid! also awesome name!