Reviews for Why Wasn't Anyone There?
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
That's so sad. And scary. And good. And I hope you don't feel like this!
Crimson Gold chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
This is an amazing poem. It's sad, and brings us back to reality shockingly fast. I've heard so many stories about this, know a couple of people too. It's a sad thing, and your way with words makes it as real as it really as. Also, Thanks for your reviews on both of my poems. I was having a crappy day and you really cheered me up.
A Stranger chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
I love the last line.
Lil Sis chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
i didnt understand it but i still love you
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Don't think I'm weird or anything, but I love self-harm poems. The emotion always shines through them, getting the reader involved and that's what I think all poetry should do. This poem is great. I love it. I'm adding it to my fave. stories list!
rachel chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
i dont know what else to say besides: COOL!
Akio the Dragon Master chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
omg... that was deep... it was a real eye-opener!
FireNeiko chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Powerful. Dark. Dank. True. Horror. Life. Love-less. Lonly.
.: ~ The Truth ~:.
Tis the signiture of the true heart.
Beautiful, Danny. Truly Beautiful.
I'll be waiting for the next!
-TC ~
dandelionia chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Wonderful rhythm, excellent imagery. I'm not one to be fond of this topic (I feel it is overdone) but I think you did a good job accurately and beautifully portraying it.