Reviews for Hold
CaramelCream chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Your suicide poems are awesome. I'm not even sure what to say anymore. They're great and deep and very well written. Good work. Keep it up.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
wow... very poweful... extremely awesome ending.. I like the alternating italics
Black Wolf of Death chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Oh my gawd. I don't know how to put it. It was sad but a very good poem. I have no idea why this kinda stuff attracts me. Oh well.
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
AMAZING! YOU ROCK! this poem is so incredible! keep up the awesome work!
mAxTeR chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
it so damn beautiful.. keep on writing.. r/r mine too..
Shades of Ink chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Beautiful... I could alomst feel the desperation... and even relief when she let go. That sounds morbid, I know, but in a way it was release.
Er... not that I'm in any way supporting suicide... merely artistically impartial.
Wonderful, though it would have been ten times better as free-verse.
Happy Tuesday! (well, almost tuesday)
Nienyalie chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Beautiful, this is absolutely brilliant.