Reviews for This Demon Inside |
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![]() ![]() ![]() In some parts it was choppy, and sometimes it just went on... but in the end, it's really good. -Diablo Darkmoon |
![]() ![]() wow...that was so cool! it made me a little tense and nervous though,wonder y? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this poem, a lot. I've got a poem similar to it, called Insanity. We all have that demon within us, some of us feed it, some of us try to kill it, others find other things to do with it. I like your expression of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *hides* you aren't going to kill me are you? hope not. it's really good though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good, although it has some flow problems. You may want to go back and adjust the number of syllables in some of your lines. Good start though, and the best of luck! |