|Reviews for Intoxication|
| awais chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
really smooth baby! :D
| DHABUZ chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
ok fine i admitt its not a romantic poem! but its one of the best poems i have read on the site nice work dudette!
| youdon'tknowme91 chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
i thought it was REALLY
beatiful :) ..hey, random question: can i know where you live? As in what country, i mean P (if you'll ever get back to me, that is p) ..was this poem between you and Him? (I'm Muslim too, but I'm saying Him as in God as in Allah but i guess it goes in general on other religion's gods too) Because that was how it felt to me.. and yup, i feel connected with your poem again, funnily P Oh, and another thing; you read stuffs on Rumi too? I love his works! :P :D okay,i'm off ;) -nahjan
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
Great poem not much more I can say than that cos it was simply beautiful!
| flowers in May chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
wow, I realy like this, keep it up :)
| The Jade Prince chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Truly beautiful; either you've read a lot of books or you know true love. Brava.
-The Jade Prince
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
very beautiful with wonderful imagery.
| Punkerella chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
is beautiful )
Thankyou for the kind words.
| Diva Chiba chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
holy... very very well written! your use of metaphors is superb. well done!
| anon123 chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
I've already reviewed this, but I just felt like re-reviewing ;)
There are a couple of lines that I really, really like...and those are:
"My beloved is every question I ask,
Every breath I breathe,
Every step I take,
Every sight I see!"
"I awoke, drunk with intoxication and bliss.
I must have dreamt of you."
So...GREAT POEM, even if something so romantiky was not what i really expected from you :)
| Birdaloo chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
nicley done! thanks for the reviews! this poem has really beautiful imagery! great job! keep up the spectacular work!
| LovesTeardrop chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
Aww that was very. Very nicely written with a good rhythm behind it. Wel done.
Thank you for reviewing my poem also.
| kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
wow cool! i'm not that into romance poems, but i really liked this! nice imagery, good job.. _
btw, thnx for the review..
| Imaan-Z-gr8 chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
hey shitty... u must be really desperate to mail me like that but anyhoo... nice work moti... bohat interesting kaam you kia hai... did that sound right? its a lovey dovey fluffy mushy poem but i dont hate it! good work... c ya kiddo... au revoir!
| hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Thanks for the review! ;)
This is a great poem, liked it very much!
Keep it up,