Reviews for Extinguished
PyroRabbit chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
Nice Prolouge! It's cool! I can't wait for the adventure to start!
Saharian chapter 13 . 8/15/2004
O yet another good chapter. You are good at good chapters...and I am so tired you wouldn't believe so ignore me if I am weird... _
Saharian
Saharian chapter 12 . 8/15/2004
AH I am going crazy trying to catch up with all my emails and author alerts and pple who are not on author alert that I know I have to review and all that and I AM GOING INSANE! Oh and for some f*ed up reason fictionpress won't load my new chapters so I can't update! Jeez. OH well. Loving this chapter, as always and I am going to go on and review the rest before I blow a fuse. _
Saharian
littlewendycat chapter 14 . 7/6/2004
It was a really good, unexpected ending! I loved this story. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my own story and pointing out some things I could do better on.
DarkSorceress chapter 14 . 7/5/2004
No, you didnt rush the ending at all. All that I can really say is that this story took a VERY unexpected turn. If you were cliche, Lerstin would have lived on; but it seems that you have learned how to beat the cliche. That is a good thing though.
All in all, an excellent but sad tale. I really cant wait for your next fic.
DarkSorceress
The DaVinci Sisters chapter 13 . 7/4/2004
Oh my gosh this has such great potential! are you going to continue writing? I hope so, this has some definite possibilities
The DaVinci Sisters chapter 6 . 7/4/2004
Wow this story is great, one of the best i have read in a while! The plot is excellent so far. YAY! ugh i have to stop reviewing so i can continue to read.
The DaVinci Sisters chapter 4 . 7/4/2004
Wow, this is a powerful story so far! I can't wait to read more!
DarkSorceress chapter 13 . 7/4/2004
NO!NOT NERLIS!ANYONE BUT NERLIS! *tears*
But no, I must move on. I must continue reading this story although you killed off my favourite character.
DarkSorceress
DarkSorceress chapter 11 . 7/2/2004
Finally...the children get to learn magic. One question...will this story be centered around Lerstin? Anyways, i eagerly await your next chapter!
DarkSorceress
Saharian chapter 11 . 7/2/2004
Being the evil person that I am I just read this and suddenly wow you updated. Srry :-( I feel so bad especially as you have been reviewing every chapter of my story. Anyway how DO you write so many stories so fast? It's amazing. As always love the characters, the plot is moving well and I can't wait for an update! :-)
Saharian
DarkSorceress chapter 10 . 7/2/2004
A very very interesting chapter indeed. Nerlis is a really good liar. I hope you have more chapters focusing on him! Update soon!
DarkSorceress
littlewendycat chapter 10 . 7/1/2004
Wow! Great chapter! thanks for reviewing my story.
DarkSorceress chapter 9 . 6/30/2004
That was a bit...graphic...I wonder what Nerlis Jr. must have thought when he woke up to find his bed sheet stained with blood! Or do they have seperate beds..? I am sure you mentioned it, but some times I miss these details.
Two very interesting chapters! I really cant wait for more!
DarkSorceress
littlewendycat chapter 9 . 6/30/2004
Great story. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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