Reviews for Extinguished |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Prolouge! It's cool! I can't wait for the adventure to start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O yet another good chapter. You are good at good chapters...and I am so tired you wouldn't believe so ignore me if I am weird... _ Saharian |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH I am going crazy trying to catch up with all my emails and author alerts and pple who are not on author alert that I know I have to review and all that and I AM GOING INSANE! Oh and for some f*ed up reason fictionpress won't load my new chapters so I can't update! Jeez. OH well. Loving this chapter, as always and I am going to go on and review the rest before I blow a fuse. _ Saharian |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a really good, unexpected ending! I loved this story. Oh, and thanks for reviewing my own story and pointing out some things I could do better on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, you didnt rush the ending at all. All that I can really say is that this story took a VERY unexpected turn. If you were cliche, Lerstin would have lived on; but it seems that you have learned how to beat the cliche. That is a good thing though. All in all, an excellent but sad tale. I really cant wait for your next fic. DarkSorceress |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this has such great potential! are you going to continue writing? I hope so, this has some definite possibilities |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story is great, one of the best i have read in a while! The plot is excellent so far. YAY! ugh i have to stop reviewing so i can continue to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is a powerful story so far! I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO!NOT NERLIS!ANYONE BUT NERLIS! *tears* But no, I must move on. I must continue reading this story although you killed off my favourite character. DarkSorceress |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally...the children get to learn magic. One question...will this story be centered around Lerstin? Anyways, i eagerly await your next chapter! DarkSorceress |
![]() ![]() ![]() Being the evil person that I am I just read this and suddenly wow you updated. Srry :-( I feel so bad especially as you have been reviewing every chapter of my story. Anyway how DO you write so many stories so fast? It's amazing. As always love the characters, the plot is moving well and I can't wait for an update! :-) Saharian |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very very interesting chapter indeed. Nerlis is a really good liar. I hope you have more chapters focusing on him! Update soon! DarkSorceress |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Great chapter! thanks for reviewing my story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a bit...graphic...I wonder what Nerlis Jr. must have thought when he woke up to find his bed sheet stained with blood! Or do they have seperate beds..? I am sure you mentioned it, but some times I miss these details. Two very interesting chapters! I really cant wait for more! DarkSorceress |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I can't wait to find out what happens next! |