Reviews for Worship
MTL chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
i realy liked this poem to! i always have liked violence.
Chaotic Charisma chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
This is amazing. "But you ask me what the crimson marks on my wrist are/They are a tally of all the lies you have told/Which one is going to be the trigger to kill me/To make me kill you even" That's an awesome metaphor. It sort of grounds the rest of the poem, somehow. I also liked the queen to servant thing. Been there, done that. lol.
my-vision chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
wow. i'm breathless. this is so sad, and so... well, determined, i guess. you really feel like you must tell him what's going on, and i like that. it's not just another "please sympathize w/me!" poem. good job!