Reviews for The Adventures of Jimmy and Satan
Liviania chapter 2 . 10/15/2007
Poor, poor Jimmy. It takes a lot of something to be able to take that. I'm not even going to question the scorpion lasers.

Something Indecent chapter 2 . 10/14/2007
Yeah you really should write some more chapters. I don't know where'd you go with it but that's not my concern. Just keep writing dude. Or terrible things will happen to you...

P.S. I don't know why I like to write threatening things to you. Maybe I'm destined to murder you on the street one day. Anyway gotta go, good story, seeing you.
WyrdWolf chapter 2 . 10/4/2007
Wow, this is an amazing ending(?) to this story. Emily with the scorpion lasers. Whoa. If I had scorpion lasers...well, I don't know. It would be interesting, to say the least.

This was so packed full of awesome stuff it would just be wasteful to list everything I loved about it. Bottom line, it rocked and made me L.M.O.A. (yes, lmoa-it's my thing).

Something Indecent chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
That was definately entertaining. Get done with the next chapter soon. If you don't...(oh I wish I knew where you lived so I could threaten you)...I'll explode with anticipation. Sure the whole event would be unique in itself but I wouldn't want to have to put my roommates through cleaning up my chunky gore and pulling out my bones that're embedded in the walls just because I wanted to read more of a story. Then again...
I Enjoy Cotton Socks chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
WHOO! Awkward moment with satan. lol.
Bella-Rose chapter 2 . 8/29/2007
Dude, don't stop! This is funny as. You need a prist or a god representative in there, you know the whole good angel bad angel thing, this story's good. Why are there video games like that?
DeathMetal18 chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
This was awsome. very um... hellish? I dont know, twas very funny though. Cnat wait for chapter two.
trash can art chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Interesting, though I have to point out that the new kids seem a bit typical.
The Watched chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
'twas indeed rather amusing.

Incredibly amusing.

Yellow Log chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
I guess the little promise you made at the end of the chapter didn't mean anything did it?

It funny along with your other work
Darket chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
I'm waiting! This shit was too funny to just stop reading for. I love it! You're a funny writer, and I hope you put up more...

Peace man
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
This is plenty funny, as well as one hell of an intriguing story. Satan wants to bang the goth, steroetyped kids moving to South Carolina...this is gonna be awesome, I can tell. I can't wait to see some more.
Maldoror chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
Some of the dialogue felt out of place, and the narration was a bit stilted at times, but I still felt this story added a unique spin on an otherwise cliche' premise (Satan making casual interactions with the denizens of the human race) and did so rather well. It really held my attention.
Alaskan-Lone-Wolf chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Cool first chapter, it's original and funny (in my odd sort of humor way). Good family scene too, I can relate easily, and I like how the Devil is portrayed like a normal human being, very sly. *Great job* Keep it up I can't wait for more chapters.

~The Goddess of Night
Kaiwaf chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Yes. YES. BEAUTIFUL. Definitely one of the funniest things I've read in quite a while.

Oh, and out of the blue, if you like really good alt horror books of magic (in that they are god), check out House of Leaves, by Mark Z Danielewski. Weird, I always shamelessly plug other peoples works. . .

Anyways, when you get out of your massive work/school scheduling, you should update this. I'd read it. Really, I would. Despite the fact that I already read one chapter and am now attempting to raise your ego levels to a previously unheard of degree.

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