Poor, poor Jimmy. It takes a lot of something to be able to take that. I'm not even going to question the scorpion lasers.

Livi

Yeah you really should write some more chapters. I don't know where'd you go with it but that's not my concern. Just keep writing dude. Or terrible things will happen to you...

P.S. I don't know why I like to write threatening things to you. Maybe I'm destined to murder you on the street one day. Anyway gotta go, good story,...be seeing you.

Wow, this is an amazing ending(?) to this story. Emily with the scorpion lasers. Whoa. If I had scorpion lasers...well, I don't know. It would be interesting, to say the least.

This was so packed full of awesome stuff it would just be wasteful to list everything I loved about it. Bottom line, it rocked and made me L.M.O.A. (yes, lmoa-it's my thing).

Wolfie

That was definately entertaining. Get done with the next chapter soon. If you don't...(oh I wish I knew where you lived so I could threaten you)...I'll explode with anticipation. Sure the whole event would be unique in itself but I wouldn't want to have to put my roommates through cleaning up my chunky gore and pulling out my bones that're embedded in the walls just because I wanted to read more of a story. Then again...

WHOO! Awkward moment with satan. lol.

Dude, don't stop! This is funny as. You need a prist or a god representative in there, you know the whole good angel bad angel thing, this story's good. Why are there video games like that?

This was awsome. very um... hellish? I dont know, twas very funny though. Cnat wait for chapter two.

Interesting, though I have to point out that the new kids seem a bit typical.

'twas indeed rather amusing.

Incredibly amusing.

Heh.

I guess the little promise you made at the end of the chapter didn't mean anything did it?

It funny along with your other work

I'm waiting! This shit was too funny to just stop reading for. I love it! You're a funny writer, and I hope you put up more...

Peace man

This is plenty funny, as well as one hell of an intriguing story. Satan wants to bang the goth, steroetyped kids moving to South Carolina...this is gonna be awesome, I can tell. I can't wait to see some more.

Some of the dialogue felt out of place, and the narration was a bit stilted at times, but I still felt this story added a unique spin on an otherwise cliche' premise (Satan making casual interactions with the denizens of the human race) and did so rather well. It really held my attention.

Cool first chapter, it's original and funny (in my odd sort of humor way). Good family scene too, I can relate easily, and I like how the Devil is portrayed like a normal human being, very sly. *Great job* Keep it up I can't wait for more chapters.

~The Goddess of Night

Yes. YES. BEAUTIFUL. Definitely one of the funniest things I've read in quite a while.

Oh, and out of the blue, if you like really good alt horror books of magic (in that they are god), check out House of Leaves, by Mark Z Danielewski. Weird, I always shamelessly plug other peoples works. . .

Anyways, when you get out of your massive work/school scheduling, you should update this. I'd read it. Really, I would. Despite the fact that I already read one chapter and am now attempting to raise your ego levels to a previously unheard of degree.

Kat