Reviews for The Man Without a Face
tabi-okaynow chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
so ive been sitting here all night b/c i really wanted to read these poems and stories of yours & the whole time ive been eating those ice pop things that had been around since our parents were kids...well anyways, i was reading this one and opening a green pop-ice tinger right((color ive never had b4)) and i read the "I am noting, I am dead" line and like gag b/c ethier i didnt like that line b/c its evil and scary and all around bad thingy thinger or the ice pop taste like shit...&&im thinkin both.
Olivia Muldoon chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
Cool. THe poor guy. I feel sorry for him.
A little tip: when you have a line that is however many sylables, it sounds better if the rhyming line has the same number of sylables. *end tip*
Good poem. Nice job!
Later,
K.S. Night
P.S. Yu are going to get very sick of my reviews.