|Reviews for Not for Me|
| dreamingmaggie chapter 11 . 12/11/2004
slow is good! i absolutely HATE it when stories are rushed! UPDATE SOON!
| Christine chapter 11 . 12/8/2004
Please update soon!It's great to see the tension building between Dave and Lexia... so you don't have to worry about not getting anywhere so far in the story...
love the story, by the way..
| limelight chapter 11 . 12/8/2004
Please, please don't give up on this story. It really isn't going anywhere, but it is still very interesting and really fun to read. I really, really hope you keep going. Maybe, in the enxt chapter, you could start to advance the plot- show how Dave begins to get over his selfishness and Lexia over her self-esteem issues. It would be great if you made Dave be the one to get humiliated in front of her once in a while- I find myself feeling sorrier and sorrier for her, and I just want the score to even out between t hem. Also, I hope that his injury doesn't hurt his bball tryouts! I want him to be captain! Anyways, I'll stop now. I just wanted to let you know that the writer's block has to end somewhere...and that this story is too good to stop! Take your time, and I'll definitely review the next chapter! Good job!
| j0zz chapter 11 . 12/8/2004
| joie 610 chapter 11 . 12/8/2004
yay, you updated! i enjoyed this chapter very much :) it cracked me up so many times... especially when i read the statement about guys' pride, haha!i'm starting to like the characters even more. normally i would think, yes, a story with 10 chapters so far and the mains not going anywhere is slow, but i'm having too much fun reading your story to care. ya don't want to write in haste. that'll disrupt the whole flow. maybe something bigger could happen between dave and lexia today?you're an excellent writer. keep it up!
| Jenny chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
You really are a fantastic writer! I canot say how much I love this fanfiction :) I hope you will update soon! Your figures are like real persons and I think you did a very good job with Lexia -
PS I love Dave and I hope that later he wont be so arrogant anymore
| PsycoPencil chapter 11 . 12/7/2004
yes! my favorite author updates!
| Dream Fox chapter 11 . 12/7/2004
Definatly coming along! I like how you switch back and forth between their views so we can get a full prospective!
| Maggie chapter 11 . 12/7/2004
Hey, this story isnt going slow, i like it! (or else i wouldnt be typing this..) I think its such a cool idea that the main girl is not the sterolized (is that a word?) perfect girl, too bad Dave is so aragont (so i cant spell, sue me :P) but i like him anyway. Keep on writting, i want to know what happens! till then!~mags
| alltw2mars chapter 11 . 12/6/2004
I really love to get Dave's POV, it makes the story that much more interesting. I love their interaction. I really liked when she flicked him, that part was really really cute. I can't wait until she gets comfortable around him so that she can stop studdering. I sound silly, but i wish she would stop being stubborn and just take the ride. Can't wait to read the update, so please for my sanity, update soon. _
| liv-star chapter 11 . 12/6/2004
yeah, you updated! I'm so glad! After a tough day at school...and on a monday too...this is satisfying. _
| Nelly C chapter 11 . 12/5/2004
hey great chap update soon!
| Reena chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
OH my God, I have just finished the prologue and I am bonafied hooked. Oh no, is this one of those sad stories, where because the heroine, as is stated in the story a coward she loses out on the chance of a lifetime. I hope it is not so, I am a sucker for love will triumph all, but despite anything or perhaps beacause of it, I will love to read on...this is one of the few intriguing stories I have read on Fictionpress, my favourites being those written by keep up the good work!
| KN chapter 11 . 12/5/2004
I haven't touched a story on fictionpress for more than a year now. But somehow your story caught my eye...even though I was supposed to be preparing for an exam of mine, I just had to catch up with your story. I finished it all in one sitting...and all i can say is that you are one heck of a writer.
I was laughing, pitying, feeling emotions throughout this story. I dont give compliments or reviews unless they are deserved and you my dear deserve them. Infact you have earned them!
If I had time, I would comment on every little detail, but for the moment i will like to say take your time in getting the two together. If its too fast it would be not at all worth the reading. But I dont want it to be a normal high school thing that you see in the movies where the hero/heroine would try to date other ppl to get their crushes jealous. Or a high school dance would cause them to kiss and the moment we see that both of them, Dave and Lexia are attracted to each other but are in denial. Dont have any pressure, because your story seems to have a life of its own.
I wouldn't want Lexia to start wearing halter tops and tight jeans just because the time is right for her to change. Nor would I like Dave to suddenly start spending time with Lexia because of his broken arm and find something unique abt her. It would seem too cliche-ish and besides I think he already seems entranced by her. As far as lexia is concerned, she is still a bit shy around people. You might have to make a scenario where somehow Natalie finds out how and why Dave was injured (coughLexiacough) and not cause him to lose face. Because that is the main problem at the moment, how is he going to save his face?How is lexia going to avoid him forever?Why did Mark know about Lexia when everyone else just doesn't recall her? Something seems fishy here to me...especially when you mentioned a scene where this girl Clarissa was imagining both Dave and Mark vying for her attention. somehow i imagine Lexia being the victim of that.
And I really love the pace you are keeping, forgvie me if I am repeating myself, but this is a wonderful pace for understaning the characters and seeing them evolve. This from a Pride & Prejudice lover, who absolutely adores Darcy .
Just don't torture us with an end where both Dave and Lexia die in a car accident just after they have confessed their love for each other. I remember reading a high school romance between a loser and elite on fictionpress that did just that. It was excellently written but the end was so rushed and so incomplete. It made me feel hollow as if their was no point of the make this one worth it, luv!You have already done a smashing job!
| Yami Sakuma chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
Oer. I like him. I usually don't like cocky boys, but he sounds EXTRA ULTRA HOT. Ooer once more.