...POOR DAVE!..
lol. Ahahaha. OK, I'm laughing at myself here. *sigh*
Anyhoo, that was a great chapter! LOVE the little..thingys...the..repeating thingys that you have in italics! Yeah, those!
And once again, poor Dave. I hope he won't get Lexia to stay away TOO long...cause that would just suck!
Well, hope you update soon cause I cant wait for the next chapter!

Good chapter... i'd like to see more Dave POV's. more emotions and feelings would be good, its got alot of dialogue and action. The denial thing with Dave's subconscious that you have going on is good... i like it...! Update more please, chapters could be SLIGHTLY longer, but its good...
tankyou, Lil Jay

cool update
bad news for Dave though
pls update soon
*smiles*

omg! i love it! so this was the thing you were talking about that dave would get really pissed off with lexia? ahh... this is so good. cant wait for the next chapter! dont make me wait too long! :)

AHAHHA! I LOVE THE LIBRARY SCENE WITH THE LITTLE GIRL! HILARIOIUS!

Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. Poos Lexia. Jeez that guy and his sister were rude, man! ...Not man. Er WOman. Ah. Or maybe not quite yet. Um... HUman! Ha! Lol. Okie. I'm done. Oh. So that's why Dave is EXTREMELY mad at her. Gotcha. Whee! ELLA ENCHANTED! Ha! You put it in there! YOU SO TOTALLY (UBERLY) ROCK, DUDE! DUDE! Ha! .:snort:. Man. Heh. I do that all the time. Snorting. And that thing where Lexia choked on her spit. It's not very pleasant. Ha. I use the word nevertheless. Lol. I guess I'm even more of a nerd than I thought I was. Lol. Anywayz. UPDATE SOON, PRETTY PRETTY PURDY PLEASE!
P.S. Could you update cruising Through soon? H\You haven't updated that one for a while. LOVED THE CHAPTER! Muahz! Ha. Sorry. Had a noneducational field trip today. Update whenever you can you find the time to please!

I cant wait 4 more!

this story is really good! honestly! I love the way the chapters are set in her point of view and we could see what Dave thinks as well.. and that shows he isn't that bad and shows that hes falling for her! hahha!
Although sometimes i feel like ripping my hair out when Lexia never stands up for herself... and i kinda feel sorry for her... but shes a great character! WHOA. The last chap.. he was so rude to her! but then again.. sweet after all he saved her! PLEASE UPDATE! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! (im sure im not the only one!)

Wonderful. I like Lexia, especially the way you've drawn her character.
I feel like telling you to hook her up with the Library Green eyed dude, just to make Dave jealous. And make him feel guilty for what he said about the basketball tryouts. And make people notice Lexia, like the way they did when she wore Natalie White's clothes. Yep. I'd love that.
Heh. Okay, I can't wait for more.

I really like your story! its very interesting and i cant wait to read more of it.. well.. dave seems mean on the last part of this chapter. :P.. and i hope you hook lexia up with the future hot doctor.. LOL.. to make dave jealous.. hehhehhehh... well.. neway.. good work on this story.. ].. .JO.

hm... i dunno, dont like that chappie as much as the rest, though i guess it's kinda hard to get someone to get really angry at someone for no reason. anywayz... got another chapter in there somewhere?
(Oh, btw, Ella Enchanted is the BEST book.)
thurinlach

nice chapter.. that new guy..he's funny- well not really, but the situation was.. Anyhow, keep up the great work!

O.o;

Ok so do you wanna know what i've decided? Well probably not but i'm going to tell you anyways...Dave is being a prick. Seriously what a dick, he has no right to be all high and mighty at her and then sure cool he saved her life and all but really he should be happy he didn't watch someone he knew getting smashed into a few pieces, blood and guts and brains and all, which in turn would eventually see him spending thousands a year to go to a physciatrist. So there dave suck it up and get over yourself, i bet you it's just a sprain and he's wonderboy and will get picked after he gets better anyways. Ok i'm shutting up great chapter update soon!
Chookstar

Oh wow! You have to update really soon, because I am totally eager to see what happens next. Yeah! I love finding new stories that are actually GOOD! Heh heh. SOmetimes I have a hard time doing that.
I really like the whole essay writing scenario you have going. It's very very original. I'm very impressed with the idea. WIsh I could be so creative :-/ So yeah. Great job with the originality. I also like how you established the relationship between Lexia and her brother. That is just awesome. So many people do the over-protective brother thing, but you go the exact opposite. I think that's just so cool. Heh heh heh. I also like the interludes you put in your story.
Lexia is a VERY interesting character. She's so unique that it would almost be impossible for someone not to identify with at least a little piece of her. Which is really neat. Her denial of her self-esteem issues is really classic. I really like how you make her constantly dis herself, and think that she's a bitch and stuff when she's really the exact opposite. It just shows that we are our own worst critic. I'm curious to see if she really did hurt "someone" a lot, as she claims ot have in her introduction.
Which brings up a question for me. Is this essay suppose to be written right before it's due. She talks about how Mrs. ANderson said the essay was due in four months. So is when she's currently writing the essay supposed to be four months from that point? Or not.
I like how you made Dave get mad at her. Glad that although he's fighting this curious attraction to her, he doesn't just suddenly change everything about himself for one girl. He fights it, like a NORMAL person would. Change doesn't just bring on a whole new person, it takes time to evolve. Imagine that!
I have a feeling that Lexia is going to hold strong to his threat. As is, majorly avoid him for a while. Until he tells her not to. Hopefully he didn't break his wrist, or arm, whichever it is, and that it's only sprained. Maybe he could wear like those soft casts that protect your from getting more injured...I totally blanked on what they're called. I know people wear them on their knees a lot. I want to say knee guards, or wrist guards (depending on what body part you are protecting heh heh heh). Maybe that is it...Yeah, sometimes I"m retarded.
Dave is really a jerk. But he's got that intriguing air about him, that makes you want to look past the cockiness to see what makes this dude tick. Heh heh. Yeah..that's it. So anyways, I've babbled on WAY too much. I just wanted to say that I really REALLY like this story. It's really cute, and very catchy. I'm eager for more, so please update soon!