This is so awsome! You did a really awsome job portraying the highschool hide-a-way and jock! Very well done! And why does Mark know her name? There should be something about that as well!

PLEASE UPDATE! I BEG OF YOU ON MY HANDS AND KNEES!

I've had a thought about your title issues. I think you should play off the storybook thing. Something like "Happily Never After" or...anything else you can think of. I can only spew one idea right now...

Wow, I love this so far. I stayed up until 1:00 in the morning, the day before school started, to finish reading. Its great. OMG, this is like the third story today that I've read and people have stopped short. Please, restore my belief in authors and update soon?

this is an awesome story. please update soon.

wow
very cool story
stupid guys smirking_i hate it when guys smirk - it is so embarrassing
i like the rivalry btwn mark and dave, it should b interesting, i'm guessing that the rivalry with mark and dave will have something to do with lexia
oh exciting
i really like this story
pls update soon
*smiles*

good chapter, looking forward to updates!

Oh you awful, awful cihld! Torturing ur characters like that! *winx* ;) keep it up!

Great chapter! I cant wait to read the next bit.

Okay... last time I reviewed I had an idea for a title, but forgot to put it in. The idea came to me after re-reading the first chapter. what about 'Flawless?' with the question mark and everything. The lines with the flaws of fairy tales and Lexia's sel-esteem issue seemed to fit into the title.
Blah... sorry. I won't be offended if you don't like it. :D

Hey,
Wow that certainly was a long chapter. And packed with amazing-ness. Yes, if you haven’t noticed yet I have a knack for turning verbs and nouns into brilliant adjectives. Call it a gift. I must say Lexia’s thoughts were more amusing than usual, especially during the “Juicy Fruit” incident. “Don’t move…Don’t you dare” etc. Very funny, I was literally laughing out loud, which resulted in some very weird looks from my mom, but aw well, she already knows I’m ‘unique’. But enough about me, gah, it’s like I have some ego that only comes out when I review—ick I’m doing it again, so sorry. The interlude was great. A little repetative since we had just read the juicy fruit scene, but still really good. I liked the lunch coversations and Dave’s thoughts. Mwuhahah, he likes Lexia, he has too big of an ego to admit to himself that he likes her—typical guy. But it’s kind of cute too, I mean the way he wanted to stand up for her, and hug her and be all sweet and sorry for what he said. I can totally see those confusing thoughts resulting in punching a locker. Ok really I can’t because I’m not one to purposely cause harm to myself. That’s just silly. I do that enough unintentionally as it is. Ack I returned to me. That must mean I need to stop this review. Awesome update, I loved it. Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing the “pissed off” moment which is coming up I hope. Update soon.
Natalie

Hey,
Hehe. I like Lexia’s ramblings about how confused she is, especially since she is telling her teacher. I like her style too, I mean why not be comfortable when you have to go to school, makes sense to me, and that’s eerily familiar to the way I dress…hmm, I can pretend Lexia is me...yeah, just what I need, another guy to daydream about heh. Double heh, she likes Elijah Wood, I know plenty of those kind of people. He’s not my favorite, but I must admit, he does have great eyes. Wow, the popular girl gossip turned cat-fight, was totally hilarious, same with the lunch gossip, you seem to write ditzy girly talk well. That’s a compliment, at least it’s supposed to be. Err…yeah, Lexia saying her thoughts out loud, that is so something that would happen to me, pie was a good cover-up. I’m not exactly lucky either hehe. Not to mention the spaghetti incident (Haha, stealth Lexia, stealth). That happened to someone at our school, but it didn’t land on her luckily, but she just slipped right in front of the varsity football table. And she had no bubblily person to change clothes with, she had to wear our ugly gym uniforms all day. Pause. Ok now I am kind of freaked out. Because my name is Natalie…and I don’t see it in stories too much, and my last name begins with a W. But I fortunately could never be head cheerleader. Ever. I mean I would, like, totally, like, kill myself. And yes those likes were inserted to make be sound ditzy, which I hope I’m not. Anyway, yeah, I’m a little bummed that someone with my name is a jerk, well not really yet, but it’s bound to happen sooner or later. Disgrace to the name hehe. But I will get over my bummed-ness. Yep. Ok that was a big rambling thingy. Back to your story, well the end. I can’t wait to see what to see what people think about Lexia’s borrowed outfit and it looks like I won’t have to wait long since you have already updated. Gosh I’m a slow reviewer. Sorry about that.
~*~ Natalie
PS. Check out my story “Community Service” if you get a chance, it has a lot of the same humor you use and I think you would like it.

Wow! This is great and I can't wait to read more! Update soon please.
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Hey! I really like your story! I'm such a sucker for these kind of stories. Yah, so up dat e it soon! Pretty pretty please! And it will have a happy ending right? Cuz from the begining I got the idea it might not, but I REALLY want it to have a happy ending cuz other wise that would suck and it would make me really sad. Oh well, either way, update soon!

Hmm when I first read the summary for this I was like "Yeah... read a million things like this before" but then I actually read it and I love it. I have to admit that it has the same sort of storyline as many things do but hey, it's a lot more original in the characters and such that it is a story all it's own. Awesome _
Saharian
PS: Thanks for reviewing my story :-)